Thank you for your application. We would like to see a few revisions for further consideration. We would like to see:
❧ History: Unfortunately, the linked wiki article is extremely sparse. Please expand on Mita's backstory and role in the plot of the novel. We don't need a blow-by-blow, but we'd like a better sense of the story, and some fleshing out of events in the AU year. Please be sure to mark where canon ends and the AU begins.
❧ Powers: This is more of a housekeeping issue than a revision, but the freebie power you've described is extrasensory and doesn't qualify as a freebie. However, it can be rolled into Mita's divination power without needing any changes.
You have 2 days to respond with revisions. You have until: 6/04 @ 11:00 PM EST to get back to us with your revisions.
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